我覺得少年好卑微啊，我不該讓人理我這句挺傷感。可是原因不夠強烈，少年以前的狂妄沒有表現出來，所以感受不到那個轉折與變化。人物顯得單一，但是卑微的刻畫是有的，尤其最後的那句「我不該讓人理我」。164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCzXNEv2KrK
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以「卑微」為主題：164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxKTDLXwR2y
特朗普是個卑微的人。164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2z4NX3Epjy
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特朗普是個卑微的人。164Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC4j7SNPWdb
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100 字微型小說
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七玖
七玖
ISSUE #159
100 篇讀者回饋系列：透明人的自白（ 37 月下七光～）留言
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