100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMEe1y3jLmM
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以怪物為主題：141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgKbsoNjflQ
創挑還沒有結果啊！141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9sMkJQ48qT
有了嗎？141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTLYRrSDPAP
還沒啊……141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBNu3lWyQtm
怎麼還沒呢？141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6GqD70u3Yd
怎麼呢……141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhb8fhgCBB3
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhGxiOuYgrM
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5lCObJGvwd
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGL9sHddrSs
今天會把報告交上來吧？141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnypaiVWxnM
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAOVOAtftpr
啊！有怪獸！141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXPztUM066N
哪裡？那裡？141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrZLAZxNoiJ
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt8DidYYgAJ
就在你你我的時間裡！141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi18CYCmuCG
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeemKDu4JeF
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～141Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLoCEeWlWg9
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