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凌曉潔 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 12!
有趣的故事，我看得很開心!!!^0^
8 months agoReply
左道
謝謝！
8 months agoReply
凌曉潔
被師父最後一句話笑死XDD
8 months agoReply
左道
😅
8 months agoReply
繁花九十九
我非常欣賞你對故事節奏的掌握，好得令人妒忌。
1 year agoReply
左道
想節奏明快些，
有時又覺得來去匆匆！
加鹽加醋後又覺臃腫！
好彩不是煮餸，
加了減不了！😋
1 year agoReply
繁花九十九
@左道,那些五棋星鎖、天羅八卦、七煞鎖魂、金剛牆，在一般作者手上（包括我），肯定將其寫上三章十八段才肯罷手。想不到這種快速推進也能做出張力，而且蠻有電影感！👍
1 year agoReply
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