100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxLRWqjDMEu
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以怪物為主題：151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ37EYCG5vIq
創挑還沒有結果啊！151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHTXtYopoX8
有了嗎？151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMPR6KFYi6t
還沒啊……151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjYVdAnFcjB
怎麼還沒呢？151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj0IS0FSDr2
怎麼呢……151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxApwhLQdkG
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPUu64XlXry
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOCSaciTCpI
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGzRNrTFIBI
今天會把報告交上來吧？151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTmxnaw0Yuk
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0SrGAd8YD3
啊！有怪獸！151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGaJVVahpP1
哪裡？那裡？151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8iXNb7aUYl
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ00Shj8yPnT
就在你你我的時間裡！151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQcOmqUjQ8A
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeCY5RNLV8V
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～151Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs7xQrHjsYc
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