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虛言
ISSUE #106
Author: 虛冲
虛言
Author: 虛冲
ISSUE #106
【七律】春花落
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鳥語清風香滿閣　低回舊事戀韶華

詩書亂讀眠為枕　斗室閒居坐沏茶

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春花落處連山嶺　續念青衣昔日家

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[1] 押廣東話 /aa/ 韻。181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXpuKt9I6Vl
[2] 春花落：青衣島之古稱，現為島上東南部的一個地方，亦為本人以往住處窗外之風景。181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF9xpkudG5R
[3] 青衣：青衣島，在香港的葵青區，為本人成長的地區。181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjQm8xdcQgk
[4] 原創作挑戰在此。

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虛言
Poetry
Last updated: Jul 26, 2025
Total word count: 16,746
Total reading time: 56 Minutes
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虛冲
香港作者 香港 詩詞 詩 香港人 宋詞 詞 虛冲 格律詩 七律 五律 虛言 七絶 五絶
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