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未來之夏野評
ISSUE #4
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
未來之夏野評
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
ISSUE #4
《夏天不會來-清流》野評
No Plagiarism!w3ZPnSrGthNuu777CVMuposted on PＥNAＮＡ

https://www.penana.com/story/66329/%E5%A4%8F%E6%97%A5%E7%9F%AD%E7%AF%87%E9%80%A3%E8%BC%89%E6%8C%91%E6%88%B0-%E6%9C%80%E7%B5%82%E5%9B%9E-%E7%B5%90%E5%B0%BE%E7%AF%87/issue/48

清流這篇文章雖然是時間輪迴，但我覺得重點卻不是輪迴。一般時間穿越的故事，角色總是透過回到過去改變了甚麼，但這篇故事中康兒並沒有因為時間穿越而改變命運，所以這篇故事想講的是命定論。

第一章的第一句話點明了全篇故事的中心思想（雖然我覺得那句話有點多餘）。或許女主角穿越的時間點不對。女主穿越的時間那麼短，有些事情早就無力回天了，如果再穿越早一點說不定還有機會。

但問題是，有些人打從一開始就不適合。

拉一下作者下水吧，這篇有政治隱喻喔！

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未來之夏野評
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Last updated: Aug 23, 2020
Total word count: 3,421
Total reading time: 11 Minutes
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錦鯉萌狼
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