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未來之夏野評
ISSUE #3
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
未來之夏野評
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
ISSUE #3
《還他無盡夏-餘餘餘》野評
No Plagiarism!zkxdlf8H5a6dQUoQLwYiposted on PＥNAＮＡ

https://www.penana.com/user/74946/%E9%A4%98%E9%A4%98%E9%A4%98541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSxaMVmo9WA

未來之夏是八仙過海嗎？又是一頭怪物！541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo1obZCTnmp

沒想到作者這麼大膽倒敘又插敘，我覺得敘事頗複雜，重看了一遍還是沒全部看懂（說聲抱歉），要看百篇八千字的評審通常不會看得太細啦！但是作者的文筆實著不錯。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXruSAAU9Z3

內文不知道為甚麼有零星的簡體字，改稿的時候可以改一下。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPUjp3LqibE

鍾鑫的心境、自殺的理由可以多講一些。錯的不是誰，果然都是八千子的錯。

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未來之夏野評
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Last updated: Aug 23, 2020
Total word count: 3,421
Total reading time: 11 Minutes
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