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皇羽的書評會(可宣傳)
ENTRY #15
Author: 咯艇
Published:
Jul 15, 2025
皇羽的書評會(可宣傳)
Published:
Jul 15, 2025
ENTRY #15
讀書：咯艇，帶來的心得，斷斷續續閱讀
Author: 咯艇
Published:
Jul 15, 2025
1 Min Read
90 Words
No Plagiarism!w0ZcdVbk5wAGzgfvunxMposted on PＥNAＮＡ

第一章的話就是感覺過於直白，只是簡單的草述，然後沒有標點符號。

第五章，字像粘合一起，可以的話隔開吧！

第十章，還可以？當然可以多描寫女角色的外貌之類的描寫。

第一次當書評，分析得比較片面，沒其他書評大佬專業

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