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《詩詞散文雜記》
Author:
木雚
《詩詞散文雜記》
Author:
木雚
ISSUE #5
《憶江南・雨日悟禪》--宋詞一闕
No Plagiarism!ylDWGhrrEBs1ylJUPNR5posted on PENANA 日本最近是梅雨季,如果不開除濕機,室內都很陰濕難受。趁著這個機會寫了一個小品,順便練習填詞。235Please respect copyright.PENANAfajZTgy7em
不得不說,歷經絕句的平仄洗禮之後,宋詞的平仄式樣比較自由一些,寫起來也比較不綁手綁腳,挺有趣的。8964 copyright protection231PENANAOunqJ8Hp3H 維尼
《憶江南・雨日悟禪》235Please respect copyright.PENANAUwyi0q1KwW
梅雨日,陰冷意闌姍。蛙叫蟲鳴連數句,喧囂騰鬧甚娛歡,浮世更知禪。8964 copyright protection231PENANAtObHUvOwGh 維尼
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此闕是《憶江南》正格調,平仄如下,歡迎有興趣的朋友也玩看看!8964 copyright protection231PENANAST2N4kPiUa 維尼
平●仄。句235Please respect copyright.PENANAV9pzENeXZ3
●仄仄平平。韻235Please respect copyright.PENANA8sUeSqkR2N
●仄●平平仄仄。句235Please respect copyright.PENANAuiTHHSODYs
●平●仄仄平平。韻235Please respect copyright.PENANAUkhlCTHwED
●仄仄平平。韻8964 copyright protection231PENANA6ZQSokfTqk 維尼
●表自由,平仄皆可。235Please respect copyright.PENANAVxgS3lmdiI
最後的句指非韻字,韻表押韻字。8964 copyright protection231PENANA81uSoTUO94 維尼
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