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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #74
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #74
《星軌》　作者：繆蕾思 Miules
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：架空科幻、宇宙軍事類型。前面介紹了故事背景等，很清楚就不是王道作品，只有信念、愛、恐懼，做出選擇的存在。

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　　目前看到第３章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：８０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：８０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：８０％

　　完整性：８０％

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　　優點：整體性高，人物描寫佳，感覺屬於慢熟型。

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　　吸引度：有清楚表達世界觀，排版舒服，因此有吸引到。

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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
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Last updated: Jul 5, 2025
Total word count: 13,858
Total reading time: 46 Minutes
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