凝雨龍年創作大挑戰【含巨額幣幣送贈+歡迎宣傳自家作品】 - 題目四 -- Outbreak戰翼敘事曲

Q1.請問你發表的是哪部作品的回覆？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOyJLaUmPdS

Outbreak戰翼敘事曲494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ04dbeqx3Xx

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Q2.請問你看到哪一章？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2MdIwrFFp6

最新進度494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfBw6QQ7uE1

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Q3.請問你喜歡哪些角色？理由是什麼？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEYdBemxlp3

露絲，因為我喜歡有內心掙扎的女角。

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Q4.請問你討厭哪些角色？理由是什麼？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkY8xluWz3E

阿祖安。494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkdploi9Evi

要進不進要退不退是何居心？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKU2F4MlJPc
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Q5.請問你喜歡哪些CP？理由是什麼？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtKYCoUpyPs

露絲X月見，因為兩受必有一攻。雙受互攻好勁啊！494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAL3Su3Wdio
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Q6.你最喜歡故事中哪些情節？試列明原因。494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM6aVZDdHdF

露絲X月見，先受後攻令人印象深刻。494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdSsyk84CF9

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Q7.你認為這個故事有什麼優點？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEj7WYeY209

對露絲的心態描寫的很細微，肉戲的營造很自然，一開始會看到掉下巴，但是思考之後會帶來♂♂哲學感♂♂494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7DuIqpPar3

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Q8.你認為這個故事有什麼改善之處？494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCY60Nzxnw9

需要更多的肉戲，肉不夠吃。494Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9T2MFhA4iU

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Q9.作品能反映作者性格，大家覺得我是一個怎樣的人？

能夠很細膩地寫出變態之歡愉的肌肉佬。

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