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角色塑造
詩妍妍
#1
如題,大家在角色塑造時會怎麼讓他不過於扁平?
上面是一個問題,這裡也有一個問題,就是如果你不想讓角色說話的話呢?
3 weeks ago
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商澐
@詩妍妍, 超酷的想法,應該會用其他人的視角塑造吧?
他沒有台詞,是活在回憶裡,還是不能說話,還是其他?
3 weeks ago
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詩妍妍
@商澐, 了解,是一個方法呢
主要是想要凸顯出那個角色在結尾講的唯一一句話,讓結尾的餘韻悠長~回味無窮。
3 weeks ago
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商澐
@詩妍妍, 那是要一句很有意義的台詞,但如果他平時有出現,可能就要用其他人的視角,大概這樣吧
3 weeks ago
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子不語
#2
賦予角色內在的衝突。
3 weeks ago
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靈貍莊缺看板娘
@子不語, mujica很衝突
3 weeks ago
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詩妍妍
謝謝你的回答,感覺角色活起來了,我去嘗試看看。
3 weeks ago
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若婆.璃
#3
代入一下 其他角色之間互相檢視的視角 幫助應該就很大了
2 days ago
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免役迷彩
#4
我的話是注重情感描寫,雖然我是寫二創同人。
1 day ago
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月見雪下
#5
不想讓角色說話的話,可以用心理描寫,如果都不想用就要用一些細緻的行為描寫了。
或者要不要試試,全部都用旁敲側擊,某某A說這個人是一個乖巧的小孩,他是我的兒子;某某B說這個人說這個人是個天才,他是我的未婚夫;某某C說這個人是我的愛人;某某D說他是爸。
他都不用說話了,但是你只會記得他。
1 day ago
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上面是一個問題,這裡也有一個問題,就是如果你不想讓角色說話的話呢?
他沒有台詞,是活在回憶裡,還是不能說話,還是其他?
主要是想要凸顯出那個角色在結尾講的唯一一句話,讓結尾的餘韻悠長~回味無窮。
或者要不要試試,全部都用旁敲側擊,某某A說這個人是一個乖巧的小孩,他是我的兒子;某某B說這個人說這個人是個天才,他是我的未婚夫;某某C說這個人是我的愛人;某某D說他是爸。
他都不用說話了,但是你只會記得他。