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財迷章魚 sponsored 500coins for Issue 9!
感謝嚮往大大的宣傳（愛心）
3 months agoReply
財迷章魚
感謝你的評論，你的意見我會好好作為參考的。其實這一篇是我的處女作，寫了幾篇後其實我也有意識到一些問題，於是我也嘗試寫了另一個作品，風格也大相徑庭，而對於你說的劇情的描寫問題我也會在之後的文章中改進。最後，十分感謝您的觀看及指導，希望以後還能多多指教了♥(´∀` )人
4 months agoReply
嚮往國度
我也是會換不同風格來寫其他作品XD這方式不僅有趣還能激發呈現出不往不同的東西呢！
倒是我自己也還在龜速學習中就是了-#-
4 months agoReply
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