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耀西係一隻龜
文字的情緒渲染很有感染力，情節有張力。尤其是這一章，有種鏡頭推進的感覺。昭霆跟雲遙的情緒描摹細膩，雲遙的自我防衛、昭霆的自責都很真實，尤其是那種想靠近又要克制的掙扎，太好嗑了！

先看到這邊，剩下的養一下再追XD
5 days agoReply
瑗酒
希望有給你們電視劇在拍的感覺XDDDD
很想好好呈現每個角色的情緒和故事
感謝你看得好認真~~~~!!!
2 days agoReply
耀西係一隻龜
@瑗酒,有！有感受到了，繼續寫，加油💪
2 days agoReply
黑靈
昭霆，你愛得太卑微了！
5 days agoReply
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