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This was another awesome chapter. I'm thinking she doesn't have a real motherly bond with her daughter, but after what happened to her, it would be hard to.

8 years agoReply

Aretice N. Treader

I haven't seen enough of her and Brisam to ship them quite yet (I'm picky with ships), but I was a bit curious about her relationship with her daughter? Even though Hania seems to dote on Emalia (or maybe she doesn't because of the horrible circumstances surrounding her birth), it doesn't seem quite like Emalia returns the sentiment.

8 years agoReply

Frances

Their relationship is delved into more deeply as the chapters go on, they have a complicated mother/daughter connection simply because Hania was so young when she had her and it was a difficult birth. She cares for her but there is a very big distance between them and Hania isn't good with emotion so it's hard for her to breach it even if she wants to

8 years agoReply

Aretice N. Treader

@Frances, Huh, that's really interesting. I'm really excited to see how their relationship progresses as time goes on.

8 years agoReply

Frances

@Aretice N. Treader, there is a lot more development but its further into the chapters, also this is a first draft for NaNoWriMo haha so its going to be a little rough

8 years agoReply

Opal Anne Rochel

Oh, I think I'm on this ship as well...

8 years agoReply

Frances

I was a little in love with Brisam while I was writing him...not gonna lie

8 years agoReply

Is it bad that I'm kinda shipping her with Brisam? But that's just me. I'm really loving the descriptions that you use in your writing.

8 years agoReply

Frances

Haha no that's good! I'm glad! Aw thanks, girl (: your encouragement is so helpful!

8 years agoReply

@Frances, Does this mean that they? *gasps* Nevermind, I'll keep my shipping to myself until things are revealed.
And you're welcome! I know how hard it is to write when people don't read/comment on your work. :)

8 years agoReply

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