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roseofnoonvale
Great story sad to see it end but beautiful
EnnaStark
Hopefully I'll write a sequel sometime :) haven't had the time to do so, but maybe this summer I can work on it :)
roseofnoonvale
@EnnaStark, a sequel would be amazing
EnnaStark
@roseofnoonvale, but it'd be hard because I'd probably put so much fluff in it because I apparently now ship my own characters...
roseofnoonvale
@EnnaStark, nothing wrong with that as long as theres plot
EnnaStark
@roseofnoonvale, yeah... my friend is going to be so angry with my plan though because I might kill her favorite character... just an idea... dunno if I will yet...
Faithios
Aw, it's always sad after we finish a story. I must say it was a good climax and ending! But I was wondering, how far away was her 'other' home from her real one and how did Paul keep Hestia from being recognized when she lived with him? Not trying to be pushy, since this was a well thought-out story, I'm just asking from just pure curiosity.
EnnaStark
Well to answer the first question, it was about an hour's drive away from the current house she lived at in the story. It was a pretty suburban area, but it was within walking distance of a really small school she could go to. Paul basically taught her how to blend in using image, body language, facial expressions, and he stressed the rule of "if everyone is doing this, you'll blend in if you do it as well." He also had her hair cut every month and when she was a little older he actually dyed it a few times. And thank you for the compliment! I really enjoyed writing this, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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