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5 years agoReply

Foreveraining

There was a part where you said, “as quick in thunder”. Did you mean, as quick as thunder? Or as quick as lightening?

5 years agoReply

Haylie Parkison

Omg. As quick as lightning.

5 years agoReply

Foreveraining

@Haylie Parkison , ah okay, that makes more sense. I guess you can change thar one yourself.
So far, your story is really interesting, and very descriptive. Keep up the good work! I’ll continue reading through your story throughout the day.

5 years agoReply

Haylie Parkison

@Foreveraining, thank you for your honest review.

5 years agoReply

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