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"The following story is based on real events that I have experienced, though some details have been slightly altered—except for the introduction."
Review/Comment:
Clarity – The phrase "real but slightly altered events" may cause slight confusion. The revision makes it clearer that the events are real but modified.
Grammar – The phrase "all except the intro" feels somewhat informal. The revised version maintains a natural but polished tone.
Flow – The revision improves readability by structuring the sentence more smoothly.
Would you like a more formal or creative tone instead?