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The world-building sounds immersive, especially with the mention of past wars, unified realms, and a looming insidious evil. The division into distinct story arcs also suggests a well-structured narrative. The reassurance that new readers can jump in without prior knowledge is a smart touch—it invites a wider audience while still rewarding longtime fans.
Overall, this sounds like an ambitious and action-packed story with strong fantasy elements. If executed well, it could be a thrilling read for fans of magic, war, and heroism. Would you like a more in-depth critique of specific aspects, such as pacing, world-building, or character development?
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