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I’m Fleming!, a professional Comic, Character, Webtoon, and Cover artist, and I just finished reading your story. I genuinely loved it. The way you build tension, craft atmosphere, and develop such authentic characters is incredibly impressive. Every scene played out in my mind like a film, and your dialogue flows like something straight off a bookshelf.
Your writing naturally lends itself to visual storytelling, and I truly believe it has amazing potential as a graphic novel or comic. I’d be honored to collaborate and help bring your world to life through expressive, cinematic art that captures the emotion and energy of your work.
I also want to mention that I’m flexible with budget, and we can discuss terms that work for both of us as we explore the project. No pressure at all—just an open invitation to connect! If you're ever interested, feel free to message me or reach out on Discord: patricia_castillo55
I’d love to explore the possibilities with you!
I hope you like my words, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Warm regards,Fleming

21 hours agoReply

Haha, I was like “45 comments!? What on earth happened?!” And then I scrolled down ☠️

1 year agoReply

Nicholas Scriptor

Wait, it doesn't have to be a poem format?

1 year agoReply

Nope. As it says, "Write anything pertaining to this sentence."

1 year agoReply

I have a love story in my bottom draw - but not too sure how well it fits.

1 year agoReply

You could always try :D

1 year agoReply

@Friday_, I'm pretty new to Penana. If I post it here, is it then banned from other contests?

1 year agoReply

@D.J.J.Mizzi, Nope

1 year agoReply

@Friday_, okay cool! I might post it then! 😊

1 year agoReply

Thank you!

1 year agoReply

@D.J.J.Mizzi, No problem!

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

These contests have all been horrible lately.

"Here's a song I like. Write a song about it"

Lazy egocentric crap

1 year agoReply

""Here's a song I like. Write a song about it.""
1. We're writing poetry, not songs (even if songs are a special type of poetry.)

2. The entries are quite good, unlike the shit I've seen you put out.

3. You're calling our work "egocentric crap" yet you're the one sitting here, arguing with a bunch of children and adults on a site meant for growing writing skills, not fucking cyberbullying.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Poltergeist, Yall need to smoke a blunt and read Irvine Welsh and Cormac McCarthy books to get a better grasp on writing.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, After you write a coherent story, I will.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Poltergeist, Quote to me the story of mine you are talking about.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, "Knife to a gunfight" Your entry is worse than anything in here. Little to no punctuation in dialogue, no pacing at all. You put absolutely no effort into it, yet call us "lazy" for writing poetry based off of song lyrics.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Poltergeist, Oh that. That was a joke. Me pointing out that no one would ever win against someone with a gun if all they had was a knife. If you read my other stories you'd know of my superior understanding of story structuring. But those accounts were all banned. So those stories are lost.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, It is perfectly possible to win in a gunfight with a knife. Unlikely but possible.

Banned, for good reason apparently. Sounds just like an excuse for your troll-like mannerisms.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Poltergeist, I wrote a pretty cool zombie story. I think it was called 96 hours.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Sounds cool. You know, if you weren't so rude constantly, your works wouldn't be deleted and you could actually prove that you're a good author? I'm a sucker for a good zombie story and would have liked to see it.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Poltergeist, Oh I wasn't like this when I first came here. Nor was I when I finished 96 hours

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Oh woe you. Pity, maybe you should prove your skills by entering.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, There's no woe or pity. I don't regret what I've become. What you people have turned me into. I am awake.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Sure thing, rip-off Batman. Should I start calling you vengeance? Also, would you like to tell me what your original account was? I'm curious to know if I even followed you.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, We were not close. Ask my former friends on here.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, So then what have I done, pray tell, to turn you into what you've become?

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, You represent what this place has become. No passion for your creations. No vision.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, So I post one contest(A contest meant to inspire others, not me) and you immediately decide to base your entire view of me off that? Well, the things you've written aren't exactly oozing with passion. And vision? Let me guess, you need glasses.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, My entry to bringing a knife to a gunfight was a joke. Aversion of expectation. Jesus you people.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, I'm not even referring to that one. I see you've entered more than one contest. And again, the point of a contest is to inspire others. I saw passion in that one line. It made me feel something. And I want others to feel it too.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, How old are you kid?

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Judging by your actions, older than you. It takes someone quite childish to insult someone without provocation.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, Answer the question. I'm gonna recommend you some stories and I wanna see if you're old enough for them

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, I think if you can handle them, I won't have any trouble.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, Are you above 15? I wont recommend them to you if you're younger because the subject matter is messed up but you can always lie to me like I lie to game store employees when I buy 18 rated videogames.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, I really don't see any reason why I'm obligated to reply to this question. Please, give me a good reason, and I tell you.

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, So you can be inspired by superior story writing and structuring. The two stories I'd recommend were made by people who posted them online for free like you do now. And now they're successful authors and screenwriters because of how good their stuff was.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Would I know who you're referring to?

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, Have you ever watched the haunting of hill house? Pretty well liked show that came out. One of the writers started out just like you on online forums. And I'll say no more because I can tell you're trying to use deduction to get me to lead you to who they are.

Trains leaving Friday, what's it gonna be? You older than 15?

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Didn't you just tell me by divulging what they wrote?

1 year agoReply

Newernameforaccount

@Friday_, Nope. Not talking anymore. If you reply saying you're older than 15 I'll privately link the stories to you. Anything else will be met with silence.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount, Oh so you'll be quiet? My prayers have been answered. I will tell you, though. I did say if you gave me a reason I'd give you an answer, and I didn't lie about that. I am over 15.

1 year agoReply

@Newernameforaccount i have a awfully strong felling that the term awake symbolizes the fact that you realize that harassing randoms (not the people who deserve it) isnt the most logical sense?

1 year agoReply

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